[THE COMPETITION] TO LOVE AND DIE ON HEIR Notes

Isaac brings it home.

It’s the end of [THE COMPETITION] week.

You’ve read all three scripts from our winners. This week we’ve shared notes on MERGER by Ramsey Ess and STARS, LIKE WATCHFUL EYES by Y. Lu, helping to make sure the quality is high and the continuity and world-building are strong.

It’s really early in the process for even professional writers to be baring their works and their souls, and we appreciate all three winners hanging in there for this process.

[THE COMPETITION] Full Scripts

Now, let’s close things out with TO LOVE AND DIE ON HEIR by Isaac Platizky.

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With that, here’s Molly with the team’s feedback on Isaac’s script.