[THE COMPETITION] STARS, LIKE WATCHFUL EYES Notes

It's Y. Lu's turn.

This week is all about [THE COMPETITION], our first ever open scriptwriting tryout.

We recently shared all three scripts from the winners, and this week we’re looking at how to make these scripts the best they can, and making sure they fit into everything we’re doing here at 3 Worlds / 3 Moons.

[THE COMPETITION] Full Scripts

Yesterday we shared our notes on MERGER by Ramsey Ess. We also told you that this process is happening much more publicly and sooner in the process than it does in a traditional comic book publishing scenario, so we know we’re really putting these writers on the spot. They’re champs for winning [THE COMPETITION], and also champs for being brave enough to do this.

Today we’re taking a look at STARS, LIKE WATCHFUL EYES by Y. Lu.

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Here’s Molly’s feedback on Y.’s story: