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May 3, 2023Liked by 3W/3M

As much as I loved everyones outlines, reading JH's comments are even better - especially "I feel like soup in space is the canary in the coal mine of extraterrestrial bad meals." Can that be on the back of the next 3W3M t-shirt? Just reading it again makes me laugh hysterically. Can't wait for more tomorrow...

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Thankful for the feedback and the opportunity. An embarrassment of riches! Everyone did such a fantastic job. Well done, everyone.

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Loved your outline

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Thanks so much, Jack! Much appreciated.

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Thanks for the feedback, Jonathan. Your comments (on all the outlines) are helpful and informative. Writing the outline was a fun challenge, and I appreciate that 3W3M is providing this opportunity.

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Thanks so much for the feedback. And thanks to all of the contestants: everyone's doing such stellar work and I'm learning so much!

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Thanks for the feedback! And shout-out to everyone in the competition. These outlines were amazing! Between those and Jonathan's notes, I have a whole different idea of how I want to approach pitches now

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