We start with a story...
Thank you for the PDF link, upgraded images, and the small little corrections. It makes me happy that all the comments are being considered. Feels truly being part of the community.
I do realise how much of a bummer it must be to see these comments on the very first post itself, where most of us sounded like we were complaining. But given this is a new way to consume comic-content, this is only in the initial phases where we highlight what's working and what's not. I'm glad that feedback is being considered. And I know I speak for everyone when I say how much we all liked the first chapter; and the discord is just going wild right now with all the fan-theories (that would never make it to reddit LOL).
Once again, thank you! The story is off to a great start.
Great start! Interesting hook. Will there be a dedicated reader app or will we be able to download files (.cbz, .cbr) to read on 3rd party apps? Just want to see this art in as hi-res as possible!
That last panel is beautiful
Interesting start for the comics, my heart sank at the "He never came back" line. I'd love to see some pronunciation breakdowns for the various names and places mentioned because I always get them very wrong in my head.
“He Never Came Home”
Gonna come in with a lava hot take: I enjoyed this.
Incredible start, gave me a perfect balance of story and obligatory data pages. I am heavily invested now into this poor kid's dad never coming back....but is he gone???? They never found the body.
I love the cultural bits, like how they measure time on multiple scales (LC/KC). The timeline is really really juicy...
Can't wait to learn about more characters from this ill-fated mission.
I would greatly enjoy a downloadable file. Story wise it is a fantastic start.
Not to be that guy, but I think there's a typo on the last data page - 945 LC...FORTRANTA BASE ABANDONED. Should it be "FORIRANTA" --with an "i"-- like in previous mentions on that page and the page before?
Jonathan, Mike and Mike, amazing work! Thank you. 2 quick questions, in a creative process like what you’ve built here, how long did this take to come together? Is this something that you’ve been secretly working on for a year? 6 months? Etc… also, when do you think - ballpark- we might get our first print issues? Thank you very much!
Extremely into this.
Fayrii panel typo: closet should be closest.
ALL CHARTS!!!! Ahhhhhhhhh this is amazing!!
That panel with the academy ruins is freaking awesome! Love those Huddleston landscapes! Based on what I've seen so far, is Huddleston doing the scenes and landscapes, while del Mundo does the characters; or will they have more fluid and changing roles with this?