[THE COMPETITION] Round 3 - Notes
Mine are in Red.
All right. Notes.
Nobody likes them.
If you didn’t check out yesterday’s post with all the scripts, here’s that:
![[THE COMPETITION] Round 3 - Scripts](https://substackcdn.com/image/fetch/w_140,h_140,c_fill,f_webp,q_auto:good,fl_progressive:steep,g_auto/https%3A%2F%2Fsubstack-post-media.s3.amazonaws.com%2Fpublic%2Fimages%2Fdfd7b9a2-b50c-43d7-8b13-43f3762c002c_1000x714.jpeg)
A few things to keep in mind reading these:
I am not the be-all and end-all arbiter of taste. How I think a story should be told, constructed, and stylized has nothing to do with what might actually work for you as artists.
As such, I tried to stick to things that are traditional rules for comic making (but I probably failed as I tend to have strong opinions on how comics should be made).
You are not finished until you are done. These notes have nothing to do with you as a writer, they’re just words I wrote about your words.
Saying that, you’re going to find that these notes are mostly complimentary. Because you guys did a good job.
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Okay, here you go. My notes are in Red in each PDF.
Tomorrow we’ll reveal who won. See you then.
I got notes from Jonathan Hickman on a script I wrote. If that’s the end of the road it’s been a great one. Good luck everybody.
Thank you for the kind and constructive feedback, Jonathan; I appreciate you and the 3W/3M team providing this opportunity. It's been a fun, challenging experience, and a pleasure to see the rich creativity and talent of this community. Good luck, everyone!